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Home page feedback gallery
Slide 1: "Satisfaction" with five checkboxes underneath it, each with a decreasing number of stars. Five stars is checked and there's a hand holding the thumbs-up sign
Slide 2: Betsy was thorough and caught things even previous readers and other editors had missed.
Slide 3: MWE is the very best editorial service that I've worked with during my 40 years as a published author.
Slide 4: Betsy knows her stuff, is extremely professional, takes what she does seriously, and cares about the manuscript.
Slide 5: Betsy makes the editing process painless, educational, and positive. She has an expert eye for detail, and she is extremely easy to work with.
Slide 6: Betsy had a beautiful style sheet with all the important information. She taught me so much about my writing and was excited to help me grow as an author.
Slide 7: Betsy was quick and incredibly thorough, going above and beyond to polish my manuscript.
Slide 8: Betsy’s passion for editing shows in her detailed feedback, and her kind, encouraging words and professionalism create an enjoyable and successful author-editor relationship.
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Services page Genres
Next to the vertical word "Genres" is a stack of rainbow books. The spines list the genres Maine Woods Editing edits: action/adventure, steampunk, some NF, romance/erotica, historical fiction, science fiction, fairy-tale remakes, mystery, fantasy.


Services page "The Maine Woods Editing Process" infographic
Request a free sample edit and rate quote (stamp reading "sample")
Do you want to work with MWE? (magnifying glass)
We'll decide on a date (month calendar page)
Digitally sign the contract (contract with pen)
Pay the $50 deposit to save your date (invoice)
Tell me about your book editing preferences (three question marks)
Send me your manuscript (email icon on laptop screen)
Pay half the invoice total ("Pay" on a phone screen)
Pay the remainder of the invoice when edits are done ("Pay" on a phone screen)
Receive your edited manuscript, editorial report, and style sheet ("Report")
Accept or reject the edits using Track Changes (green check mark and red X)
Have someone do the final proofread (page with red circles and check marks)
Publish your book and celebrate (hand holding book next to a glass of champagne)
Leave me feedback (three emojis with written feedback)
Send me your cover and links so I can help promote your book (pink book cover with heart)




Costs of AI graphic
Writing one 100-word email with AI = the electricity to power an LED bulb for 14 hours AND 16.9 ounces of water
If 10% of working Americans do that once/week for a year = 20 days of electricity for all of D.C. AND 1.5 days of water for all of Rhode Island
One AI-generated image = 50%-100% charge for a smartphone. Upward of 34 million images a day are generated.
Copyediting page chart - copyediting versus proofreading
Manuscript features are listed down the middle of a checklist. On the left, checkboxes indicate the features covered by copyediting (CE); on the right, proofreading (PR): spelling (CE and PR), grammar (CE and PR), punctuation (CE and PR), capitalization (CE and PR), repetition (CE and PR), missing words (CE and PR), tone and clarity (CE), sentence structure (CE), phrasing (CE), word choice (CE), readability (CE), inconsistencies (CE), formatting (CE and PR), layout (PR), tense/POV (CE), timeline (CE)


Copyediting page "Samples of Maine Woods Editing Copyedits"
Note about the edits shown: I had limited tools for coloring and highlighting text, so for the most part, I've used the strikethrough tool to indicate changes even though I did not necessarily delete things in the original texts.
Manuscript corrected to change "deserts" to "desserts" and remove a comma: "You should stay
,and help me eat it." Editor comment: My tip for remembering desert versus dessert - you want two helpings of deSSert (or more, apparently - no judgment!)."Glass clinks as he places them onto my desk and pours. 'I thought things went well with Roger.'
'It did.' " Amended to: "The glasses clink as he places them on my desk and pours. 'I thought things went well with Roger.' 'They did.' "
"Chapter Four
Owen." Editor comment: You haven’t identified the POV character in the previous chapters."The elevator door catches our attention. I try to stop the desire knotting my insides, but after three months of conditioning, I'm like Palov's dog, dripping at the first ding." Editor comment: I love this!
"I grin and hand him the manil
la folder." Amended to: "I grin and hand him the manila folder.""I pretend to work on the computer while sneaking glances at him through the
translucentwall separating his office from the rest of the floor." Editor comment: This means light gets through it but you can’t really see anything behind it - like windows in public bathrooms. Transparent would be clear."The train ride
takes forever, but the walk I get through in ten minutes instead of twenty. By the time I get to the chapel, I'm a huffing, sweaty mess." Editor comment: Since you’ve already said it’s an hour, you’re really going for a feeling here. Maybe “it’s interminable”?" 'Also there's a meeting.'
'Add it to my calendar.' I cut her off, needing her to leave so I can explain myself to Paige." First period changed to an em dash. Editor comment: When someone’s dialogue gets cut off, you use an em dash to indicate that. Since I added one here, it does the work of saying he cut her off, so you could delete that part in the next line.
"It doesn't mean that for one night I can pretend that I don't have clients depending on me to get them the justice my family never had..." Editor comment: And for one night I can pretend that...? This avoids all the negatives that make readers’ heads spin wondering what cancels what out and makes a positive
"We arrive at the villa and walk down the stone path, past the crashing waves to our door." Editor comment: On p.12 when you first describe the villa, it doesn’t sound like they follow the path past the waves to the door - the car stopped in front of the door, and she could hear the waves.
"Everyone knew Pete would end up living in town, getting some blue-collar job, and Budweisering himself into a pot belly and a few divorces." Editor comment: I love this [Budweisering] as a verb! Your prose is always so much fun!
"I could see both Stephanie and Tonya's eyes going dim as I spoke." Added 's to end of Stephanie's name. Editor comment: Since they don’t share a set of eyes, they each need an ’s.
"A sunbeam glinted off the waves, momentarily blinding me midstep and causing my ankle to wobble atop my brand-new wedge sandals. No one saw that, I assured myself. I'm fine, totally fine." Editor comment: The italics tell readers that these are her internal thoughts, so you can delete the dialogue tag.
"Tingles cascade down my spine at the endearment, sending my romance novel-loving heart into a flutter." Hyphen changed to en dash. Editor comment: Use an en dash to connect 2 words to 1 other word.
"Now that Ava has pointed it out..." Ava changed to Ana.
"I press the phone to my ear. 'Ana?'
'You and Parker.' Ana gasps." Editor comment: I would swap the order of these two sentences - it makes more sense for her to gasp first. Also, Ana already knows that the two of them have something going on from an earlier scene in the office.


Proofreading page chart - copyediting versus proofreading
Manuscript features are listed down the middle of a checklist. On the left, checkboxes indicate the features covered by copyediting (CE); on the right, proofreading (PR): spelling (CE and PR), grammar (CE and PR), punctuation (CE and PR), capitalization (CE and PR), repetition (CE and PR), missing words (CE and PR), tone and clarity (CE), sentence structure (CE), phrasing (CE), word choice (CE), readability (CE), inconsistencies (CE), formatting (CE and PR), layout (PR), tense/POV (CE), timeline (CE)


Blog post: Freelance Editing Prices
A boss cartoon represents full-time employment. Colorful circles with icons show what employers typically cover in wages and benefits: Full-time employment typically provides both wages and benefits that cover family and employment needs: child care, education, savings, utilities, housing, food, transportation, clothing, health care, retirement savings, office furniture, technology devices, software, office supplies, professional training, sick days, vacation days, professional networking, and health insurance.


Several client silhouettes represent a freelancer's "boss." The colorful circles from above are inside yet another one that shows icons that represent a freelancer's costs: the self-employment tax, overhead, a website, professional services, books and resources, internet, travel expenses, events, advertising/marketing.


An open book has "50K words" on its pages. Next to that, it says ~2,500 words/hour = 20 hours of work = 1 full week


The same text and image from above, plus two equations are added: $0.002/word = $100 arrow $5/hour. $0.02/word = $1,000 arrow $50/hour

